Score: 10

"The bus explodes because there was a bomb on it"

submission: Waiting for the Bus!

date: September 12, 2009

Excellent work guys, this is the true embodiment of the Cyanide and Happiness spirit put into motion.

Score: 10

"A breath of fresh, brimstone-scented air"

submission: The Tainted Ep. 1

date: February 10, 2007

Finally, something that kicks ass instead of looking like it came out of one. I must thank you for not using stick figures, speakonia, sprites, or lousy gradients. I am totally looking forward to the next chapter, I wanna find out what's up with the winged dude. Keep rockin' out those gems!

Score: 2

"That was pointless."

submission: Temple Of Solomon

date: February 10, 2007

First of all, the description section is there to describe it to your viewers, the whole point being so that they don't HAVE to waste time researching something. Not that anyone is really going to care once this gets blammed. Practice more, but don't submit your practice flashes. Eventually you might come up with something decent. Don't know what decent is? Go research it.

Score: 10

"I smell a new Front Page contender"

submission: StarCraft: Alliance

date: July 2, 2006

This was truly remarkable work. As I'm just learning to use Flash and it's companions myself, I can appreciate the amount of time and effort you have obviously put into creating this. The models looked like they took a lot of pain to produce, but totally worth it, they're beautiful. I love how you presented the Protoss, especially the voices, and the Zerg models and animation were breathtaking. My compliments on a job well done, and hopes to someday learn the ropes of Flash as well as you have.

Score: 8

"This was awesome"

submission: - Tribute -

date: July 1, 2006

A great Tribute to Tribute, the synch was right on and the style of displaying the lyrics was really cool. I also appreciate the fact you didn't compress the life out of the music so that it sounded like it was playing through a tin can. I like a Flash where I can crank up the speakers and not be aurally assaulted by static and noise artifacts. Great work!

Score: 7

"This was really good"

submission: Coffee.

date: June 30, 2006

Not many first submissions actually have a plot, good animation and graphic effects, and actual character in the characters. I felt the blue guy's pain when the coffee place was closed, you picked a good musical choice for this =) To DRBOB13: I dare YOUR first flash submission to be better than this, if you're going to say "flat out that it sucked" Because this showed a lot of work and attention.

Score: 5

"I got a good 46 before I got bored"

submission: Keep ups

date: June 26, 2006

Good concept, expand on it, maybe make it part of a soccer training, which in turn could be part of something even bigger. Add sound effects like you want your audience to be hypnotized into staring at it for hours. I do commend you on the physics, they do very well.

Score: 6

"Here's my suggestion to improve this"

submission: Break-out

date: June 25, 2006

Give it a preloader, more audio choices, mouse control instead of the keyboard, as it moves a bit too quickly, but most important of all, and I stress this: Do NOT make your audience wait for 5 minutes while the game area takes it's sweet time to appear. That annoyed the hell out of me. The graphics were nice and clean, the sound complimented them, and overall it was pretty fun.

Score: 5

"Hah, I've seen better, but I've also seen worse"

submission: IAMWSP 1: One-Track Minds

date: June 25, 2006

This isn't too bad, and at least you're practicing Flash, instead of saying "i kno thiz sux but dont blamit plz itz my first flashs" on a lame attempt to get onto Newgrounds. It's good to see someone who appreciates the value of effort, not to mention corny jokes (Wow, it's so magical that it jumps into your hand!) Good way to cover lack of animation and get a few laughs out of it =P Good job

Score: 7

"Haha, this was great"

submission: Lowrider stopmotion

date: June 18, 2006

If you've ever heard of Knox, you know that on most of his stuff, the only thing he uses flash for is to compile his stop motion video and dub sound to it, and he's one of the most celebrated artists on Newgrounds (at least, he is in my eyes) So you did real good with this, You had a sense of style, you were certainly creative, you showed effort which shone throughout the whole piece, you have a good sense of humour, you did great with the sound timing, and you didn't use an extremely low video compression, which while it makes for a large file size and a short movie, also makes it look better. Great work, and like others before me, the only suggestion I have is to make it a bit longer.