The bus explodes because there was a bomb on it
Excellent work guys, this is the true embodiment of the Cyanide and Happiness spirit put into motion.
A breath of fresh, brimstone-scented air
Finally, something that kicks ass instead of looking like it came out of one. I must thank you for not using stick figures, speakonia, sprites, or lousy gradients. I am totally looking forward to the next chapter, I wanna find out what's up with the winged dude. Keep rockin' out those gems!
haha, thanks man.
That was pointless.
First of all, the description section is there to describe it to your viewers, the whole point being so that they don't HAVE to waste time researching something. Not that anyone is really going to care once this gets blammed. Practice more, but don't submit your practice flashes. Eventually you might come up with something decent. Don't know what decent is? Go research it.
Apparently you don't have the attention span to make it to the "This could take hours" part of the description.
In closing; go fuck yourself.
Thank-you for your time.
I smell a new Front Page contender
This was truly remarkable work. As I'm just learning to use Flash and it's companions myself, I can appreciate the amount of time and effort you have obviously put into creating this. The models looked like they took a lot of pain to produce, but totally worth it, they're beautiful. I love how you presented the Protoss, especially the voices, and the Zerg models and animation were breathtaking. My compliments on a job well done, and hopes to someday learn the ropes of Flash as well as you have.
Thanks a lot! :) Glad you enjoyed it - it did take quite some time, as they do! Just keep at it - my progression is clear in the episodes of this series heh - practice makes perfect!
This was awesome
A great Tribute to Tribute, the synch was right on and the style of displaying the lyrics was really cool. I also appreciate the fact you didn't compress the life out of the music so that it sounded like it was playing through a tin can. I like a Flash where I can crank up the speakers and not be aurally assaulted by static and noise artifacts. Great work!
Yeah, I hate compressed songs in flashes as well. Drives me crazy
This was really good
Not many first submissions actually have a plot, good animation and graphic effects, and actual character in the characters. I felt the blue guy's pain when the coffee place was closed, you picked a good musical choice for this =) To DRBOB13: I dare YOUR first flash submission to be better than this, if you're going to say "flat out that it sucked" Because this showed a lot of work and attention.
Hah, I've seen better, but I've also seen worse
This isn't too bad, and at least you're practicing Flash, instead of saying "i kno thiz sux but dont blamit plz itz my first flashs" on a lame attempt to get onto Newgrounds. It's good to see someone who appreciates the value of effort, not to mention corny jokes (Wow, it's so magical that it jumps into your hand!) Good way to cover lack of animation and get a few laughs out of it =P Good job
Haha, this was great
If you've ever heard of Knox, you know that on most of his stuff, the only thing he uses flash for is to compile his stop motion video and dub sound to it, and he's one of the most celebrated artists on Newgrounds (at least, he is in my eyes) So you did real good with this, You had a sense of style, you were certainly creative, you showed effort which shone throughout the whole piece, you have a good sense of humour, you did great with the sound timing, and you didn't use an extremely low video compression, which while it makes for a large file size and a short movie, also makes it look better. Great work, and like others before me, the only suggestion I have is to make it a bit longer.
Tnx for the constuctive critisism! :D
ps: Its length has to do with the school assignment. It had to be MAX 33 sec :D
great review tanx!
I have but one suggestion for you
The suggestion, if it hasn't been put out there yet, is make this into something huge, be it an animated series on TV, or even a feature-length movie. You certainly have it in you, and I'd definitely pay 10 bucks to see the world of Brackenwood on the big screen. The talent behind this is something magical, so my praises are sung to it. I can think of only one word to sum up the artist who has such an imagination, and the skills to bring it to life, one word which is an inspiration to me, and likely to yourself as well. Miyazaki. Great work.
I was pleasantly surprised
I've never seena flash done by a 13 year old that was what I would consider to be "Good" but this was a nice surprise. I was getting ready to blam when I read the comments, but after seeing the movie, I'm going to protect this piece. You have some real hidden talents, so practice, practice, and practice your arse off and you can do well. The only thing I would suggest you change is slow down some of the voices. They do sound funny, but a bit speedy. The same goes for the Island of Stickmen sequence. Lots of room for jokes there, but it felt like it was trying to rush by, much like a person with minor stage fright speeds through their lines so they can exit stage left. Keep on fine tuning your flash skills, I see something good becoming of you.
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